I Am Poems

Welcome to our 2013 I Am Poems! Please read our work and comment on what you like about someone's piece using the comment section below. Remember to address the comment to the writer, as there are lots of different authors on this page!
















For example:
Jason, I really liked how you used an ellipse in the line, "I want...to conquer my fear" It made me wonder what you were going to say, and gave the sentence more power.
Mrs. Harvey


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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2012 at 7:55 PM

    I like how they all wrote in there poems how they told what they are like.One of them said that they are FUN&CREATIVE and one said that she is a BRIGHT SMART GIRL and another one said that I am a person who can do most things.YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB ON TEACHING THE CLASS ABOUT POETRY:):):):):p:):):):)p:):):):P:):):p:):P
    MRS.HARVEY

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  2. Douglas FlorianAugust 30, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    Nice poems, kids! Watch the rhythms and line breaks! My favorite was Geraldine's.

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    1. Geraldine♥September 12, 2012 at 12:26 PM

      Thank you Mr.Florian I spent quite time on my poem!!

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  3. IrisSeptember 15, 2012 at 9:45 AM

    I loved how creative every one was when we made the poems

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2012 at 10:05 AM

    We loved reading these today in class. The children provide a real insight into themselves as people.

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  5. MarieOctober 25, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    Dear Blogging Along,

    Nice poems! I really enjoyed your poems. I enjoyed Geraldinee's poem the maost but the rest were also good.

    You can comment at out blog.

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    1. Mrs. HarveyOctober 26, 2012 at 6:56 PM

      Thanks Marie - they did some great work on these. I didn't get your blog address though...out blog?

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